Ok, it's been a rough trip, but time to start backing this truck into the driveway. I'm aiming to publish next Tuesday (a week from today) after which I will crawl off somewhere and crumble into dust.
Here's draft 2:
The text has more-or-less converged, I hope. There are some missing figures, and the model only half works right now (but you should be able to get the idea), and endless little futzing to be done.
If you are up for some proofreading, it would be much appreciated. I'm looking for:
- typos
- things that are confusing or don't make sense
- things that are wrong or misleading
- awkward or embarrassing phrasing, bad rhythm
- other copy-editty suggestions
It's too late for major structural or content suggestions, and they'll just make me feel bad.
Thanks again for your help.
-Bret